Telling Stories in the Present

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Storytellers switch to the present for past events to make them vivid.

How It Works

In Awadhi stories the storyteller often leaves the past tense at the exciting point. Everything before it is in the past. The turn uses the present.

PartTenseExample
setting the scenepastरामू घर पहुँचि गवा
the surprisepresentअउर का देखत अहै कि दरवाजा खुला अहै

The switch makes the listener feel they are there. Common cue words are तब, अउर and का देखत अहै कि (and what does he see).

The surprise is usually something seen or heard. After it, the storyteller may return to the past. The present is only a short flash.

You hear it most in spoken storytelling.

Examples (4)

  1. रामू घर पहुँचि गवा, अउर का देखत अहै कि दरवाजा खुला अहै।

    Ramu got home, and what does he see but the door open.

    The story moves from the past to देखत अहै.

  2. बुढ़ऊ बजार गए, तब देखत अहैं कि सब दुकान बंद अहैं।

    The old man went to the market and finds all the shops closed.

    देखत अहैं is the present for a respected person.

  3. मुन्नी रात मा उठि गई, अउर सुनत अहै कि कउनो अँगना मा चलत अहै।

    Munni got up at night, and hears someone walking in the yard.

    सुनत अहै brings the scene close.

  4. हम स्टेशन पहुँचेन, तब देखत अही कि ट्रेन छूटि गई।

    I reached the station, and see that the train has left.

    The speaker uses अही with हम.

How It Connects

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Telling Stories in the PresentLevel 5

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The example mixes पहुँचि गवा and देखत अहै कि.