Free Indirect Discourse

Level 6Sounds Like sloboden indirekten govor

Direct: „Зошто ли дојдов тука?“ — си помисли Ана. · Indirect: Ана се прашуваше зошто дојде тука. · Free indirect: Зошто ли воопшто дојде тука?

How It Works

Three ways to give a character's thought.

  • Direct speech quotes the words: „Зошто ли дојдов тука?“ — си помисли Ана.
  • Indirect speech reports them with a verb of thinking: Ана се прашуваше зошто дојде тука. (see индиректни прашања со прашален збор)
  • Free indirect discourse drops the frame and lets the thought stand in the narration: Ана излезе на улица. Зошто ли воопшто дојде тука?

How to recognise it.

  • Person: the character is still таа or тој, as in the narration, but the sentence expresses the character's own view.
  • Questions and exclamations that belong to the character: Што ќе каже шефот сега? · Колку беше убаво тогаш!
  • Spoken particles such as ли, па, зар, ама (see па; бе; де; ма): Па, што друго можеше да направи?
  • Words from the character's position, such as сега, тука, утре, inside a past narration. The character's own tense can stay: Утре сѐ ќе заврши.
  • A choice the character faces, often as a да question (see што да правам): Да ѕвони или да си оди?

A Macedonian extra: the l-form. A character's sudden discovery can appear as a surprise l-form inside the narration: Значи, таа сѐ знаела! (So she had known everything!) The l-form marks this as the character's realisation, not as a fact the narrator states.

Why writers use it. It brings the reader close to a character without breaking the flow of the story, and it can blur where the narrator stops and the character begins. You will meet it in modern novels and short stories, often next to rhetorical questions. In everyday speech, people use direct or indirect speech instead (see директен и индиректен говор).

Examples (5)

  1. Излезе на улица. Зошто ли воопшто дојде тука?

    She went out into the street. Why on earth had she come here?

    Word by Word: Went-out on street. Why Q at-all came here?

    The question is hers, but it stays in the third person, with no дека and no quotation marks.

  2. Марко ја погледна вратата. Да ѕвони или да си оди?

    Marko looked at the door. Should he ring or just leave?

    Word by Word: Marko it looked-at door-the. To ring or to self go?

  3. Пак доцнеше. Што ќе каже шефот сега?

    She was late again. What would the boss say now?

    Word by Word: Again was-late. What will say boss-the now?

  4. Ја прочита пораката уште еднаш. Значи, таа сѐ знаела!

    He read the message once more. So she had known everything!

    Word by Word: It read message-the once more. So, she everything knew(reported)!

    The l-form знаела shows his sudden realisation.

  5. Седеше крај прозорецот. Колку беше убаво тогаш, пред да се промени сѐ!

    She sat by the window. How lovely it had been back then, before everything changed!

    Word by Word: Was-sitting by window-the. How-much was nice then, before to self change everything!

Common Mistakes

  • Mixing a verb of thinking with the character's own first person.

    Ана се прашуваше зошто дојдов тука.
    Ана се прашуваше зошто дојде тука.

    After a verb such as се прашуваше, the thought is reported in Ана's third person. Дојдов would mean that the narrator came.

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Free indirect discourse builds on reported speech and story tenses.